Sunday, May 07, 2006

loved her not

At first, he was certain
that he loved her
once long before and never again.
but afterwards, he fell into doubt
thinking now that truely,
he loved her
not at all, and never before
this pointed moment.

1 Comments:

Blogger tvdthanh said...

My favorite line is "this pointed moment". I like the unusual way you put words together where you have an unconventional adjective next to a very conventional noun. It's like my current favorite phrase "a polite fiction".

Tue Oct 30, 01:44:00 AM 2007  

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