The place we take
A quiet peaceful something
A reality, less a violent abstraction than a white florescent hum
And how we might be, content, upon occasion
With blissful flights of playful banter in between
With odd looks and sideways glances, interrupted
The place we take, we will amount to something
The place we take will be ours indeed
A quiet peaceful something
A reality, less a violent abstraction than a white florescent hum
And how we might be, content, upon occasion
With blissful flights of playful banter in between
With odd looks and sideways glances, interrupted
The place we take, we will amount to something
The place we take will be ours indeed
posted by seg at 12:08 PM
2 Comments:
Uh yeah. I had to go to a poetry reading, and I think it messed me up a little, because I wrote this shortly after.
So if you don't like it, neither do I.
And what if I do like it? I think the statement it makes is good, but not as clear as some of the others. The one about the train tracks and "Quiet Punishment" are much more clear and pointed.
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